The iris and pupil are pretty good, just make sure you don't make the eye looking like a football (very common eye mistake...).Try looking in the mirror and take a good look at the shape of the outside of your eye.It won't be an oval looking like a football.Actually, the part the eye is closest to your nose is pretty rounded as the line comes down from the top of your eye.Another thing to watch out for is how much white is above and below the iris, otherwise it will look like the person is scared.Anyways, I like the inner iris and pupil, good luck with the rest.

Umm....honestly^^;?I can't really tell any differences from the last revision (not trying to be mean but....><)....you know, you can't be afraid to change things more dramatically.like darkening up the skin tones so it doesn't blend so much into the whites of the eye.You might also want to add the eyelid unless this person is one of those people whose eye lid can't be seen.Another thing that always makes an eye look more relaxed is to pull the eyelid a bit over the iris.Otherwise you got the surprised look.I used to struggle on eyes before until I practiced over and over.Here's another trick when drawing an eye.People draw eyes with an outline(being the eye lashes) that goes all the way around the eye.You when you do this, you leave the center bottom (right below the iris) with the skin tone colors.It makes it look SOOOOO much more realistic.Add these ideas together and you can really make something out of it.Like I said, use a mirror.It WILL help.Hope to see some dramatic changes by the next revision^^.

P.S. For some reference on what to draw, you can use my drawing "The Eye of the Wretched" to get a feel for what I'm explaining other than the surprised look thing because I intensionally made the eye look surprised in that drawing...^^;

Aww, how adorable.. We have a japanese artist aboard? Sweet. 8)

It looks like an old movie. Awesome! I can't believe you have the patience of drawing it in 9 hours. But it's all worth it

That's so nice. I like the rough coloring, kind of like oil pastel. I think you should add a little lighting to the nose tip. and one of the eye seems a little higher than the other

I think it's terrific. It's way better than some of the crap I post in the advanced section.

That's still pretty good for a beginner, very cute.

Actually....you should have just used the dark color to create the shadow rather than mix it with the lighter one...

Whoa, this is nice.I like the sheath ...it may be a sword rapped up, I dunno....but just know I like it.You're right about the BG too, it's great with the sun rays and everything.Nice work.

No, Marcello, the shadow is behind him, on the inside ledge of the cliff that you cant see. Consistent with all the other shadows. (That is, if he is casting one yet. He just now jumped :) He would have to still be standing on the ledge for there to be a shadow there.

Ummm.......I dunno.......don't watch enough movies to know the answer^^;;.But I would like to comment^^.Once again, I like the hand!The shading is real nice.I wish I could draw hands.......you have to teach me sometime><.Guess the space problem never recovered....I wish I could see it's "true" completion....><.

Whoa, I can see it now XD.Dang......that's one nice pic.....the shooting star is awesome^^.It's definitely getting somewhere, can't wait to see it finished XD.

Say what you want, but I think it's getting better by the update^^.I like how there's a mixture of colors in the sky and the moon's glow><.Very pretty picture and honored to be able to accept such a drawing(seriously!).Thanks for the great picture, and I'll dedicate my next piece that "I" actually think is worthy of giving to you^^.So basically, it won't be one of my screw-ups like.....(cough,cough).......the stupid eye in the beginner board.....(in defensive mode since he submitted another thing to the beginner board after being threatened not to><).*print screens your drawing*