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Hello =D

horsefeather (Apr 2, 2008)

My first draw here, I've never used Lascaux sketch and I think I have alot to learn...

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davincipoppalag (Apr 2, 2008)

Hey Horsey! Take a look at this ..might help some.... great first pic! http://2draw.net/wiki/index.php/Lascaux_Sketch

ElfenCeres (Apr 2, 2008)

Very good ^^

horsefeather (Apr 2, 2008)

oh yes that will help me alot! thanks dave =D

davincipoppalag (Apr 2, 2008)

Cant wait to see what you do once you got your sea legs

Green

ElfenCeres (Jul 30, 2007)

It not so good -_-'

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Punky (Aug 7, 2007)

It's not that bad. :) I like your coloring, but your lineart needs to be cleaned up. I can't really give advice on lines, but if you ask somebody else they might be able to help you.

ElfenCeres (Aug 7, 2007)

Okej ^^

Sweetcell (Aug 7, 2007)

For lineart on Oekaki I like to use the airbrush, med thick lines, then coming back with the soft erasure on med flow and shaving the lines down, takes longer but the lines are clean and smooth, plus you get a difference in thickness. Some people like to use the watercolor tool. If I attempt (and that's a challenge for me) solid shading I'll use the pen with the size at 2. Any thicker and it would be, well too thick :D Maybe size 1 for more detail but the only time I use the pencil is to sketch. Pencil just makes too ragged lines. Hope that helps Elfen. Experiment to find what works best for you.

This piece is nice, but there's just too much white. If you put in the rest of her body and do a different color bg it would look more finished.

ElfenCeres (Sep 13, 2007)

It helps me very much thank you Sweetcell.

Ugly

ElfenCeres (Jul 28, 2007)

It`s my first time, and this is so ugly -_-'

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deathking (Jul 28, 2007)

Its a lot better than some of the other stuff here, I hope to see more from you I like the style.

MelissaMissy (Jul 28, 2007)

Welcome! Nice pic.

Sweetcell (Jul 29, 2007)

It's nice, you just need to clean up your lines and make them less jagged. Maybe sharper color but the subtelty works here. Welcome Elfen.

ElfenCeres (Aug 7, 2007)

Thank you ^^

The two sisters

ElfenCeres (Jul 29, 2007)

This time I made somthing good XD

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Sweetcell (Aug 4, 2007)

Try using the airbrush and watercolor tools for lineart. You'll get cleaner and smoother lines trust me. And I'm not sure if your using it, but go easy on the blur tool, it can kill a piece. It's pretty so far Elfen. I like their expressions, especially the one on the left.

ElfenCeres (Aug 7, 2007)

Thank you. I don`t know how to use airbrush yet in oekeki bbs yet but I should keep on practise it ^^