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renire (Mar 30, 2005)
a sad story that goes with the picture:


Jenny was so happy about the house they had found. For once in her life 'twas on the right side of town. She unpacked her things with such great ease. As she watched her new curtains blow in the breeze. How wonderful it was to have her own room. School would be starting; she'd have friends over soon. There'd be sleep-overs, and parties; she was so happy It's just the way she wanted her life to be. On the first day of school, everything went great. She made new friends and even got a date! She thought, "I want to be popular and I'm going to be, Because I just got a date with the star of the team!" To be known in this school you had to have clout, And dating this guy would sure help her out. There was only one problem stopping her fate. Her parents had said she was too young to date. "Well I just won't tell them the entire truth. They won't know the difference; what's there to lose?" Jenny asked to stay with her friends that night. Her parents frowned but said, "All right." Excited, she got ready for the big event But as she rushed around like she had no sense, She began to feel guilty about all the lies, But what's a pizza, a party, and a moonlight ride? Well the pizza was good, and the party was great, But the moonlight ride would have to wait. For Dan was half drunk by this time. But he kissed her and said that he was just fine. Then the room filled with smoked and Dan took a puff. Jenny couldn't believe he was smoking that stuff. Now Dan was ready to ride to the point But only after he'd smoked another joint. They jumped in the car for the moonlight ride, Not thinking that he was too drunk to drive. They finally made it to the point at last, And Dan started trying to make a pass. A pass is not what Jenny wanted at all (and by a pass, I don't mean playing football.) "Perhaps my parents were right....maybe I am too young. Boy, how could I ever, ever be so dumb." With all of her might, she pushed Dan away: "Please take me home, I don't want to stay." Dan cranked up the engine and floored the gas. In a matter of seconds they were going too fast. As Dan drove on in a fit of wild anger, Jenny knew that her life was in danger. She begged and pleaded for him to slow down, But he just got faster as they neared the town. "Just let me get home! I'll confess that I lied. I really went out for a moonlight ride." Then all of a sudden, she saw a big flash. "Oh God, Please help us! We're going to crash!" She doesn't remember the force of impact. Just that everything all of a sudden went black. She felt someone remove her from the twisted rubble, And heard, "call an ambulance! These kids are in trouble! Voices she heard...a few words at best. But she knew there were two cars involved in the wreck. Then wondered to herself if Dan was all right, And if the people in the other car was alive. She awoke in the hospital to faces so sad. "You've been in a wreck and it looks pretty bad." These voices echoed inside her head, As they gently told her that Dan was dead. They said "Jenny, we've done all we can do. But it looks as if we'll lose you too." "But the people in the other car!?" Jenny cried. "We're sorry, Jenny, they also died." Jenny prayed, "God, forgive me for what I've done I only wanted to have just one night of fun." "Tell those people's family, I've made their lives dim, And wish I could return their families to them." "Tell Mom and Dad I'm sorry I lied, And that it's my fault so many have died. Oh, nurse, won't you please tell them that for me?" The nurse just stood there-she never agreed. But took Jenny's hand with tears in her eyes. And a few moments later Jenny died. A man asked the nurse, "Why didn't you do your best To bid that girl her one last request?" She looked at the man with eyes so sad. "Because the people in the other car were her mom and dad." This story is sad and unpleasant but true, So young people take heed, it could have been you.
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renire (edited Mar 31, 2005)
ok....ok...ok.......SHEESH......oh and thanks chezas ^_^........its not my fault im stupid at drawings, and im sorry about this whole thing......*hides away in corner*

oh and childlike.......ITS A BACKGROUND U DIV
Childlike_Vampire (Apr 1, 2005)
I is Child, not Childlike....what's a DIV? O_o
renire (Apr 4, 2005)
div, divvy or whatever, it means you are stupid and childish.
Childlike_Vampire (Apr 15, 2005)
Well...OH NO YOU CALLED ME CHILDISH that's the last thing I was going for with the whole CHILDLIKE thing...gaspeth to no end.
But I know I'm not stupid so that doesn't offend me either. It was nice of you to try though!
(psst your picture still sucks maybe you could put as much effort into your drawings as you do into your comebacks...oh wait they would still suck.)

OKAY...I'm sorry. That was the mean-ness side of me, now how about....you are obviously young, and this is actually a cute drawing. I think the girl is very cute and she looks very sad and lonely. (I refuse to read the story by the way I'm afraid it might be a bad sad story.) I just was trying to inspire you to prove me wrong and do better. Maybe you will someday, I dunno. I just always am hoping people try harder around here all the time. It, like my ever present longing for a second childhood, will probably never happen. *shrug*
drawn in 34 min with Lascaux Sketch Classic
renire (Mar 30, 2005)
which is what happens to me when someone at school says my teeth are goofy. this is for chezas_place but i dont think shell like it......i dunno why.
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Chezas_Place (Mar 30, 2005)
wow i love it.such hate in her eyes makes me remember the other day when i beated the fuck outta my ex best friend.
renire (Mar 31, 2005)
:D ^_^ ty
drawn in 17 min with Lascaux Sketch Classic
Chezas_Place (Mar 30, 2005)
well i realye like it..that is why i names it blue shadow.i love the colours.tough..she is pretty.uhmmmm leave a comment if u want.
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Chezas_Place (Mar 30, 2005)
thanku
drawn in 7 min with Lascaux Sketch Classic
Chezas_Place (Mar 29, 2005)
no one knows my blood.they only see my skin..touch me now baby because i need u so bad..i love the way u make love to me.just come back.dont ignore me.i love u
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Childlike_Vampire (Mar 30, 2005)
This is really pretty, I really like the colors, and the placement of the figure, the pose, the wings, expression and such. I just wish it wasn't so messy. :(
Chezas_Place (Mar 30, 2005)
lol sorrey i was kinda mad when i was doing it..i was mad and sad so i did it like that .
renire (edited Mar 31, 2005)
noice! ^_^

childlike its not messy! its sketchy and noice ^_^
drawn in 42 min with Lascaux Sketch Classic
Chezas_Place (Mar 13, 2005)
a red tear falls apart from my eyes...a black sky trying to cry..my heart in the wrong way..my head is jumping for darkness.. i cant seem to get outta this shadow...comon give me ur hand and help me out..all i could think of trough this nite is Dj and hes pain..all of my pain is inside waiting to crawl outta my mouth...my heart i am gonna get it out and stip it because i cant have anymore feelings..I HATE MY LIFE
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Shanghai (Mar 13, 2005)
Good use of cold colors to express your emotion, but I'm not sure why there's a bright red thing in the corner shaped kind of like australia. it's a little distracting there.
Chezas_Place (Mar 29, 2005)
that lil thingeh is supose to be a heart as my symbol but oh well it came out wrong sorrey
drawn in 18 min with Lascaux Sketch Classic
~unwritten_law_girl~ (Mar 12, 2005)
he said "when i said to leave me alone, i didnt mean forever." because in the comic i made him in, a girl he liked had died on a journey to find a doctor for her illness. They had a fight and he said for her to leave him alone. she died, and he regrets it. so thats where i got it from.
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fairy_goddess (Mar 13, 2005)
that picture make me all teary eyed, its realy good
~unwritten_law_girl~ (Mar 13, 2005)
thanx ^_^
Chezas_Place (Mar 29, 2005)
OMG i llove the message a lot.
renire (Mar 30, 2005)
this is beautiful.....truly amazing...but so sad.....
drawn in 1 hour 10 min with Oekaki Shi-Painter
~unwritten_law_girl~ (Mar 24, 2005)
more avi art
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Chezas_Place (Mar 29, 2005)
i love it.infact i loooooove all ur drawings
drawn in 30 min with Oekaki Shi-Painter
~unwritten_law_girl~ (Mar 24, 2005)
i dunno.. i was bored so i was doodling lol
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Shanghai (Mar 24, 2005)
Looks a lot more sinister than the actual movie was. It has an ethereal quality to it.
StrawberryYamichan (Mar 25, 2005)
Ver sinister, indeed. Thats so awesome
Toonah (Mar 25, 2005)
Thats hot...I love The Nightmare Before Christmas. Best movie ever =]
Chezas_Place (Mar 29, 2005)
I LOVE ITTTTT SO MUCH LOL HES ONE OF MY FAV CHARACTER LOL I HAVE A POSTER ON MY ROOM *hyper* anyway sorry for that but he's just so fucking kool.
drawn in 13 min with Oekaki Shi-Painter
~unwritten_law_girl~ (Mar 14, 2005)
a friend of hers had died and someone is there to meet her, but she didnt know he was going to come. i hadn't finished it and i might not be done for a while, i think it will turn out good... i still have to draw the other character.
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~unwritten_law_girl~ (Mar 24, 2005)
drawn in 38 min
now i just have to work on the background
~unwritten_law_girl~ (Mar 28, 2005)
drawn in 24 min
i tried adding more detail to the background then i already had, i think im finished now
Chezas_Place (Mar 29, 2005)
o.o i love it.
Zack (Mar 29, 2005)
Curious attire for attending a funeral.
drawn in 1 hour 22 min with Oekaki Shi-Painter
x_mydelusion (Mar 27, 2005)
Ehhh. I'm trying to paint that one picutre of Amy Lee
6 comments – latest 4:
Chezas_Place (Mar 27, 2005)
I LOVE AMY I LOVE AMY I LOVE AMY I AM A FAN OF HER SHES SO DAMN HOT AND SHES SO FUCKING KOOL ( i am a goth sorry..and i am a girl,no i am not lezbin or bi i am just crazy and i like to act like a bi)
squee (Mar 27, 2005)
Good start. Her face is like.. roundish and kinda hard to draw but your start is really good. You'll get her face just right :D
Reich (Mar 28, 2005)
awsome, cant wait to see this when its finished
x_mydelusion (Mar 28, 2005)
ugh. peeps, It's not letting me revise this picture. Eh, oh well. I did what I could.
Unfinished
drawn in 1 hour 46 min with Lascaux Sketch Classic
 
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