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choc_gum_dropz
(Jun 21, 2007)
Yeah, I'm at work right now....long time no see, eh? Just a quick doodle while talking to customers and what not.... Does anybody know how to get the pressure thing?? |
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quas
(Jun 22, 2007)
I got bored so I drew this its not that good but it'll do
Sweetcell (Jun 22, 2007)
Paradise is spelled with an S honey.This needs some work. Please go back and fix the lining. It's very sketchy. Using the erasure on med/low and slowly shaving and trimming down the lines makes them smoother and cleaner. Clean up the color bleeding out of the lining. A highlight in the eye would make it sparkle. And fix the word by replacing the C with an S. If your bored you don't have to send, you can save this on your personal files instead. Try putting more effort into your pieces. You'll learn more and get better. |
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metamonkey
(Jun 21, 2007)
none
Sweetcell (Jun 22, 2007)
DO NOT use the fill tool. It's the devil's curse. Use layers (on the left of the screen) Your lineart needs some work, it's too sketchy. Try using the air brush to make thick lines then come back with the erasure on med/low to shave down the lines. It'll be cleaner. There's more to fix but I'd be writing an entire itinerary. Keep working and improving, and do spend more than 16 minutes on your pieces. The results show. Go back and clean this up, it'll look so much better. Welcome. |
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ionicmistress
(Jun 21, 2007)
avi art.
Sweetcell (Jun 22, 2007)
I'm not going to repeat myself. Look at your other two pictures for suggestions to improve this picture. They're not bad really, just needs more work.And maybe think about something other than a white background to make them stand out more. |
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ionicmistress
(Jun 21, 2007)
aviart.
Sweetcell (Jun 22, 2007)
Do you use the blur tool? If you do, please don't. It can ruined a picture if not used properly. Again, make her chin bigger and rounder and darken the lineart (especially around the bows, I can barely see them) Highlights in the eyes would make them sparkle, ink her ears to make them stand out, fix the color bleeding from the bows and hair (are you using layers?) Find out where the light source is coming from and put highlights where the light would hit and shading where it wouldn't (in this case I'm guessing the light is coming from the right) Make your lettering better and make your signature smaller, it's taking away from the picture, I look at that before I look at the girl, and make her skin darker. If you spend more time on your pieces you'd see better improvement. |
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ionicmistress
(Jun 21, 2007)
avi art yet again.
Sweetcell (Jun 22, 2007)
The chin needs to be rounder and bigger, the lining needs to be darker (I can barely see it) The coloring is too light, try a darker shade. Her eyes are too large, make them a little smaller and smooth the lines with the soft erasure. The words are a distraction over her head, try putting them below her, and use the font (letter) tool. It'll look much better. And try some shading and highlights in her hair, this would look so much better. You have more than enough space, please go back and work a little more on this icon. You'll see a world of difference. This isn't critique, just artistic tips. Welcome |
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quas
(Jun 22, 2007)
I loooooooooooooooooooooove pokemone :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
Fiesta (Jun 22, 2007)
Pokemon is awesome.. and this chimecho is too. :3- goes back to playing pokemon ranger - ^o^;
Sweetcell (Jun 22, 2007)
Avoid the fill tool, it leaves behind white marks that's hard to fill in. Use layers to color, and go back and clean up the colors bleeding out, it makes it look unfinished and messy. You might want to work on your lineart as well. Not bad, fairly cute. Next time spend more time and you'll get better and better results as you improve. Welcome. |
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tokyomewmew
(Jun 22, 2007)
From Shrek ever after!
deathking (Jun 22, 2007)
Its really cute but try to use a smaller brush so the image is a little cleaner and the airbrush tool is for light touch ups and to get that soft effect, also try to find a better light source cause theres so many omnipresent light sources here just to make things shiny. |
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Shiori-san
(Jun 21, 2007)
Just a little doodle. X3~ Love!
Trace_Balthier (Jun 21, 2007)
Awwwr it's so cute X3~ **heart*
quas (Jun 22, 2007)
awwwwwwwwwwwww thats the cutest thing ever
pancakes_rock (Jun 22, 2007)
Awww~ lolz cute i like the hate and how you made the eyes. |
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Axil62
(Jun 21, 2007)
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Axil62 (Jun 21, 2007)
I thank you. my mother thanks you.
Rukia (Jun 21, 2007)
Somehow Brokeback Mountain comes to mind.
DeadlyBlondeArcher (edited Jun 21, 2007)
The last time I made pudding it was chocolate, and it was homemade from scratch, and it was two days after I had a hysterectomy. (just a partial one, but it still wasn't any fun) When the bowl slipped from my hands because I had my fat toddler niece Caroline wiggling on one hip (she weighed like 11 lbs at birth...big lil' girl) this was much later and she was a lot heavier, and I was trying to move the bowl from the counter to the table...it slipped from my hand and crash, break, splat... broken glass and chocolate pudding on the floor, the the cabinet doors, the walls... it was like a chocolate pudding atom bomb. I immediately recalled the parting words of my funny spectacle wearing little old ob/gyn surgeon... "No lifting... no sweeping, no mopping, no vacuuming, blah blah... for at least 6 weeks"...... haHAH... so just for fun, I called him at home and said "HEY"!!! I was lifting my fat niece and I dropped a huge bowl of pudding on the floor. You said no lifting, no mopping... here's a reality check, doc... there's no one else here to do it, should I put her on the floor and let her play in the broken glass and pudding while you drive over to baby sit and mop? I hung up on him while he was laughing. :D I managed to clean up, but we both had "pudding pants" before it was over. I have no idea how this was intended to be interpreted, but that's honestly my take on the lovely work of art. Doctors are sooooooooooo stupid, but pudding pants can be fun, anyway.
Axil62 (Jun 22, 2007)
I just realized how this could be taken if you follow the revisions and use a little imagination, hence the brokeback Mountain comment, but no, Just began as a guy at a bar, then for no reason he was saying butt, then I didn't like the smoke in v1 so I redid it and while I was there I changed his expression a little, then I decided I only liked the smoke part so I went with that and then I heard Ray Romano from Everybody loves Raymond call his wife Pudding pants on TV, so I put that in. |
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