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I want it to be just like this, it might be finished, what I'm looking for are critiques. I am blinded by the fact that it's my drawing, it looks right to me. Ref.

Should it be cleaner? Should the lines be darker? Should I add a color for shading/contrast? Should I shade more like I have? Is it fine the way it is?

_{This can be moved to intermediete if you think so. This is for a local bands website, I was asked eons ago to do it, I have 6 more people to do, but fortunatly they are all head and shoulders shots. Then I'm going to take the individual drawings and put them together somewhat like the ref. I'm not sure though. lol.}

6 comments – latest 4:

emmamommalag (Jun 5, 2005)

I like this a lot. Especially her smile.

Childlike_Vampire (Jun 5, 2005)

Well, I kinda wanted to do her a favor by makin her look younger, haha. No reason not to have fun with artistic expression, make em look good. :D Thanks so much.

WhoopsieDaisy (Jun 5, 2005)

sseeing her face was just so contagious i had to smile too...very well done

renire (Jun 19, 2005)

wow, this is totally amazing, all i suggest is that you should make her face a bit less scrunched up and sad/angry looking. its great!!!!!

Detail study of Michelangelo's depiction of God

Axil62 (Jun 5, 2005)

Michelangelo was a pretty good artist I bet.

6 comments – latest 4:

DeadlyBlondeArcher (Jun 5, 2005)

I'll never forget how in awe I was of his work when I viewed his sketches in an exhibit at the art museum in Ft Worth. You certainly captured that free pencil/sketchy look.

Kloxboy (Jun 5, 2005)

DBA: Dan or Michelangelo?

DeadlyBlondeArcher (Jun 5, 2005)

I viewed Michelangelo's sketches in Fort Worth, of course, although both guys have enough talent to "wow" me.

silvercoyote (Jun 5, 2005)

Michelangelo was my favorite Ninja Turtle. ^^

Sorry, had to put that in there. Nice job. Really love the sketchy look.

Mary

Gemmy619 (Jun 4, 2005)

1st one out of the BB house (ima try and do them all as a way of practice with my drawing cos i need it, especially with faces lol)
reference used: http://www.channel4.com/bigbrother/housemates/housemate_news.jsp?id=7

4 comments – latest 4:

voodoobunny (Jun 5, 2005)

The nose is great o.O

Ceido (Jun 5, 2005)

I've been watching a bit of BB. You got a good likeness there. :)

Xodiak (Jun 5, 2005)

She looks nice, I like her jaw most. Sexy. >:)
|XOD|

geekyshoes (Jun 7, 2005)

BB!mary was my favorite housemate!!i wished she didn't leave

tree, sky, etc

Zack (Jun 5, 2005)

I'm trying to improve my personal palette.

9 comments – latest 4:

Zack (edited Jun 5, 2005)

Thanks. I'm thinking I didn't bring out the yellows and tans in the clouds as much as I intended, and I regret changing the tree's leaves from v1. Still feels too soft, too. Hmm.

beginner_and_enthusiast (Jun 10, 2005)

I love this man - very artistic!

Cordelia_Pink (Jun 10, 2005)

This looks paintsy! I like the tree's shading and stuff.

nekodesu (Jun 21, 2005)

The colors are beautiful! They make this drawing very serene looking.

Beauty

DeadlyBlondeArcher (Jun 4, 2005)

comes from within

I found this photo and at first I thought it was digital art, but I was reading the photographer's explanation of what she had done... she placed a laser light beneath a rose and photographed it. I thought it was so unique and pretty that I wanted to do it here.

14 comments – latest 4:

davincipoppalag (Jun 5, 2005)

What an unusual and beautiful drawing. The light looks perfect .

Axil62 (Jun 5, 2005)

You enjoyed doing this one didncha? :)

Childlike_Vampire (Jun 5, 2005)

Wow that's pretty. I wanna dozen of em. :D I really like the different colors, especially the blue.

WhoopsieDaisy (Jun 5, 2005)

wow...nuthin that hasn't been said...but it -is- beautiful dba...wonderful work as usual

Wolf Man

Menyway (Jun 5, 2005)

i tend to think things to much and mess up my drawings so I decided to just draw and not think how to draw it and it actually came out decent.... This is Teirney my Indian Wolfman... he's my baby so please dont steal him ^_~ *cuddles 'em* XD

4 comments – latest 4:

Menyway (Jun 5, 2005)

O.O umm.... opps..... *goes to fix it*

Menyway (Jun 5, 2005)
drawn in 4 min

cleavage is now fixed..... O.o *can't belive i did that* >.<

DeadlyBlondeArcher (Jun 5, 2005)

I love the chocolately look the flesh has. *nibbles on one of it's ears* :)

Nyuusen (Jun 5, 2005)

Wow, that's really good. But he scares the hell outta me.

fantasy art?

featherstone (Jun 5, 2005)

I really don't know... the pic came out kind of boring though

3 comments – latest 3:

HunterKiller_ (Jun 5, 2005)

This should be 13+ =]
Mmm... nothing like lying naked in the grass... with a glass of wine... and a ray of sun light piercing through the rain clouds.

emmamommalag (Jun 5, 2005)

Watch out for chiggers!

davincipoppalag (Jun 5, 2005)

sunburn! don't fall asleep there!

Radical Edward

NETO (Jun 4, 2005)

Will color soon, please comment! + )

12 comments – latest 4:

NETO (Jun 5, 2005)

Thanks for the comment mate

Menyway (Jun 5, 2005)

Wwwaaahhhh Edwarrrrrdddd!!!! I love this girl!!!! She's such a spaz!! ^_____________^ Great job Neto!!!

SanzoGirl (Jun 5, 2005)

I love Ed.^_^ This is so good! I love the eyes the most. =3

~unwritten_law_girl~ (Jun 5, 2005)

HOLY CRAP!, I LOVE ED!!! people think ed is a boy, but she's not!^_^

A dance for the Master

xandria-tchebbi (Jun 5, 2005)

Here's another image for a member of my club. ^^ She told me to draw her a surprise for her prize so I decided to draw her OC. :)

2 comments – latest 2:

squee (Jun 5, 2005)

0__0 more sexiness.

Menyway (Jun 5, 2005)

Wow this is awesome!!! You are really kickin these drawings out aren't ya!! ^_^

squee (Jun 5, 2005)

Ugh.. my heart hurts and i dont know why... i feel anxiety when i shouldn't.. nothing bad's happened recently, so what's the problem?

I have all these mixed feelings that i can't control.. i feel like screaming yet not making a sound.. T_T

3 comments – latest 3:

Noremac (Jun 5, 2005)

play monopoly ^.^ or drink milk... milk heals the heart

HunterKiller_ (Jun 5, 2005)

No no, i heard drinking orange juice stops heart burn =]

Noremac (Jun 7, 2005)

drinking orange juice kills me X.X