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Getting better - the shadow under her jaw is good - try mixing some purple (very lightly) into the very darkest shadows of her face. Also, her lips need more definition- better than it was before, I can start to see that this is indeed a girl and that she's got some definition to her features - as the other one was very flat. You have the contours of her face right (except for her nose, but I'm really not sure what to do there, I think her nostrils are too long?) The background colour kind of washes her out, so if you picked another colour that might help as well.

Keep it up! <3 I'm very much liking this so far.

accidentalidentity (edited Nov 12, 2007)
drawn in 19 min

Okay, thank you. I'll add that to the shadows and fix the mouth later. I think I'll add more definition to the hair as well, and the nose needs more tweaking. What color would you suggest for the background?

accidentalidentity (Nov 23, 2007)
drawn in 15 min

Bleh.

accidentalidentity (Nov 23, 2007)
drawn in 3 min

Ergh, I have no idea how to use the text tool.

Bug on windshield

TaCO (Nov 10, 2007)

Out of of window washer fluideeeeeiougpsdfgfgg

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clover_pocky (Nov 11, 2007)

I think I'm afraid. o_o

Then again, we have bugs like this in Florida.

Peacock

davincipoppalag (Mar 30, 2007)

My rendition from a photo by escrimador at DA http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/51957979/?qo=1&q=by%3Aescrimador&qh=sort%3Atime+-in%3Ascraps

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Aubrey (May 13, 2007)

Both of the revisions are really good. The depth in this one, not just from the background but, from the face and everything in the bird is really cool. Almost feels alive.

davincipoppalag (Jun 1, 2007)

Thanks Aubs... I posted the one I finished in another program on DA..basically refined this last one with shi-painter pro

Anna (Nov 11, 2007)

That blue is striking \o/

davincipoppalag (Nov 11, 2007)

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