The face is good but a bit too long. If you raise the mouth, lower the eyes a bit, and form the mouth so the corners line up to the middle of the eyes it would have better form. The space between the bottom of the nose and the top of the mouth is a fingertip (place your finger on the curvey part below the nose to see) As well make the head/hair smaller. It's too big and round (less you were going for boufant look :})
To make your lines less sketchy try usng the airbrush thickly, then shave down with the soft erasure. Takes more time but the results are worth it. If you add a neck and color in her hair and put a darker bg it would finish this.
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The face is good but a bit too long. If you raise the mouth, lower the eyes a bit, and form the mouth so the corners line up to the middle of the eyes it would have better form. The space between the bottom of the nose and the top of the mouth is a fingertip (place your finger on the curvey part below the nose to see) As well make the head/hair smaller. It's too big and round (less you were going for boufant look :})
To make your lines less sketchy try usng the airbrush thickly, then shave down with the soft erasure. Takes more time but the results are worth it. If you add a neck and color in her hair and put a darker bg it would finish this.
It's nicely done, just needs tweakng.
will change the face too, thanks!