I suggest you spend more time on your pictures and look at anatomy/proportions and perhaps even take a
few life drawing classes before even trying to go into the video game art industry :\
As for this picture, don't use the shape and fill tools and seriously, try spending more time on your pictures.
The legs are WAY too short and shoulders are too drooped and angular because of the line tool.
The person lacks eyebrows and pupils and a proper hairline, also, the top and bottom part of lips aren't exactly the same either.
My suggestion to you is to try to get used to the applet without submitting and probably draw more on paper before
trying to do any more here.
Work on your spelling/grammar/punctuation, too. :I
Do listen to Mai, she knows what she's talking about. If you need to practice you might want to try other oekaki sites that have practice boards. AVOID THE FILL TOOL. Look up anatomy as suggested, AVOID THE FILL TOOL, don't rely on the line, oval or other specialty tools, you won't learn properly if you don't learn how to do it freehand, AVOID THE FILL TOOL, PLEASE spend more time on your pieces, you won't learn anything if your just going to sketch a 13 minute doodle, AVOID THE FILL TOOL, and agreed to what Mai said about body proportions, AVOID THE FILL TOOL. Best thing is to go to an art class, soak up all you can (despite it being done on computers game makers still need to have a basic understanding and ability to draw a human form, as well as everything under the sun, you just don't turn on the computer and click a button and it's done for you) and practice, practice, practice. That's the biggest thing. Oh, one more thing, AVOID THE FILL TOOL.
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few life drawing classes before even trying to go into the video game art industry :\
As for this picture, don't use the shape and fill tools and seriously, try spending more time on your pictures.
The legs are WAY too short and shoulders are too drooped and angular because of the line tool.
The person lacks eyebrows and pupils and a proper hairline, also, the top and bottom part of lips aren't exactly the same either.
My suggestion to you is to try to get used to the applet without submitting and probably draw more on paper before
trying to do any more here.
Work on your spelling/grammar/punctuation, too. :I
kthnxbye.
I was wondering if anyone was going to catch that. Hilarious.
Haha ;]