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Zack (May 4, 2007)
drawn in 1 hour 33 min

davincipoppalag (May 4, 2007)

I don't have the technical knowledge to give you real crits..but I can tell you what I like. I think the area around the chin looks great and the eye on our left too.. the right one looks a little small and crossed? This almost looks like Klox could have done it..which I consider to be a high compliment Mr Zack

SneakyWalter (May 5, 2007)

'Bout time.

Zack (May 5, 2007)

Thanks! Yeah, I think the chin turned out well. It's funny, when I cover up everything except the right eye, or everything except the chin, it looks fine to me. I'm thinking the problem has something to do with either perspective or proportions between the different parts of the face.

HunterKiller_ (edited May 5, 2007)

Yeah dude, it's the eye, the right eye. Covered it up with my thumb and the rest gets an instant improvement. I think it maybe that it isn't aligned horizontally with the other features.
I think it needs to be higher.
I'm no expert with this stuff, so don't take my word too seriously. =)

I bet Klox would know the exact answer, he must, drawin' dem faces all day long. =]

Zack (May 6, 2007)

That could be. I'm starting to think that the eyes are drawn at the wrong perspective for the rest of the face. Cover everything from the bridge of the nose down and the eyes look okay. What do you think, Klox?