I'm not seeing how she's really fat, but whatever.
Having looked at the animation, I can say that you should try drawing lineart first, then coloring it in. As it is, it looks like it was put together piece by piece rather than done with the result in mind. It could use some shading, as well.
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Having looked at the animation, I can say that you should try drawing lineart first, then coloring it in. As it is, it looks like it was put together piece by piece rather than done with the result in mind. It could use some shading, as well.