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MelissaMissy (Mar 10, 2006)
drawn in 18 min

MY CHARACTER!

Kuo-Shinigami (edited Mar 10, 2006)

You asked me to come comment and give some critique *grins* so here I am!! Well, first off, I love the colors. They all go together very nicely and the character's design is wonderful as well. The time you spent was 18 minutes, so maybe, if you spent a little bit longer on it, it'd come out more to your liking. Also do you use a tablet or mouse? If you use a tablet, well, I think you just need to practice a bit more on it and get the hang of it. If you use a mouse, then I have to give you major props, this pic is absouletly awsome if you did it with a mouse (since mouses are so hard to work with and you spent such a small amount of time on it.) Also, the proportion looks a bit off, theoretically the arms should be two lengths of her head and same with her legs and torso/abdomen/pelivic area. Like wise, her hands should be half the length of her head, as well with her feet. A great place to get tutorials on these things (for free) is: http://bakaneko.com/ and if they don't have what your looking for go to: http://polykarbon.com/ . Anyways, keep it up! And thanks for the comment ^^. Oh and I'm loving the pink hair *is crazy about pink hair.*

-EDIT-

Sorry if I critiqued you harshly >< I didn't mean to....though I did it so your true potential would shine through ^^ so... I hope that helps you.

kristine (edited Mar 10, 2006)

If you use a mouse, then I have to give you major props, this pic is absouletly awsome if you did it with a mouse.

this was done with a mouse...

Also, the proportion looks a bit off

A bit?!

DoOp (Mar 10, 2006)

harsh kristine, harsh But i agree with kristine :P I'm betting Kuo was just being nice :)....

MelissaMissy (edited Mar 11, 2006)

i done it with a mouse, but i am new here and only 10 years old so come on, i think it's pretty good, eh? also u werent harsh kuo, keep commenting!

Gigandas (Mar 15, 2006)

I too believe Aubrey's car is well done, but cars are man-made and aren't quite as hard as drawing humans...so I dunno why everyone keeps linking to that pic rather than say, her portraits (which are more impressive).

Kuo-Where did you get that theory on proportions? It doesn't seem quite right......to name an example, my feet are probably closer to my actual head size as opposed to being half it's size.

MelissaMissy (Mar 17, 2006)

thanx G.
i am not very interested on proportions it just looks strange when the hands and feet are so big
lol
sorry bud, keep commenting guys!

theonlyone (Mar 30, 2006)

So? I'm ten.
-.- Although people'd never guess it.