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bobernater (Jan 6, 2005)
drawn in 25 min

inatyrb (Jan 6, 2005)

I think you blurred it too much. But the fire Still looks good. Not too bad.

yuohoo (Jan 6, 2005)

you know you don't have to tell that on the discription, just put on the little rating thing, I like the fire.

bobernater (edited Jan 6, 2005)

well its suposed to be blured in the
background in a fire scene duhhh its not always focused...

inatyrb (Jan 6, 2005)

Well I knew that, But I think that since that background isn't focused much, you should add more detail in the Part of the picture that is supposed to be focued on more. If you do that, it will really bring it out. It looking sketchy like Doesn't fit in that much. I'm just trying to help!

bobernater (Jan 6, 2005)

well thaNKS FOR THE ADVICE

davincipoppalag (Jan 7, 2005)

This reminds me of that scene in "Lord of the Flies" where they have Piggy's head on a stick. Do what inatyrb said. Make the head clearer and with more detail , and you will have something.

bakuraiscool (Jan 7, 2005)

It looks too blurry to me...I think the orc head should show more.