ok Im starting to loose interest, I wish I could do a collab with this, but I dont know how, so I think Ill work on it one more time, I sure could use some tips or suggestions on what to do to polish it up, thanks!
Her vagina disturbs me. o_O
I think at the angle you drew her, you shouldn't see so much of her vagina..
Otherwise, I really like how the yellow in her hair fades into orange and I like the blush on her cheeks.
yeah i wasnt that happy with that area either. i tried to find someone to collab with me but nobody was interested, so... oh well. hey klox, could you give me a tip where im off on the proportions?
QM: It really depends on what you're trying to achieve here. There's minimal shading and definition on the figure, was that intentional as part of the style? The figure is grounded on a slightly textured hill, which also doesn't have much form to it and would be consistent with the overall style of the piece.
If you intended this piece to have form and dimension, I would say you need to do a bit more shading, treating all the forms in the image as basic 3-D shapes (cylinders, cubes, spheres, etc.). If on top of that, you intended the fairy's anatomy to be similar to that of a human, I would check out some anatomy books, preferably ones made for artists. Here some quick and basic references I just found:
- basic human proportions
- 60 pages of Dynamic Figure Drawing by Burne Hogarth
- a nice little proportions tutorial
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I think at the angle you drew her, you shouldn't see so much of her vagina..
Otherwise, I really like how the yellow in her hair fades into orange and I like the blush on her cheeks.
If you intended this piece to have form and dimension, I would say you need to do a bit more shading, treating all the forms in the image as basic 3-D shapes (cylinders, cubes, spheres, etc.). If on top of that, you intended the fairy's anatomy to be similar to that of a human, I would check out some anatomy books, preferably ones made for artists. Here some quick and basic references I just found:
- basic human proportions
- 60 pages of Dynamic Figure Drawing by Burne Hogarth
- a nice little proportions tutorial