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I'm not going to be harsh though I am going to tell you the good AND bad points of this.
Good is that it's cute, a button nose, nice hair and eyes and overall, I like it.
The bad points are that the lines aren't very neat or smooth and you should fix them and also make a background.
The skin is good and overall it's really good for a first drawing.
Ok, from what I see she knows form a little better. Melissa before you tell other artists what to improve, please improve yourself. This is getting annoying.
Chiru, this is a good first. You have more than enough room to clean up the lines (they are messy and take away from the piece) Just go back with the soft erasure on medium flow and shave down the lines until they're smooth. The base is there so that shouldn't be hard. Find the light source (which looks like it's coming from the right) and add the highlights on that side. Especially in the eye for sparkle. Shading under the chin, a little under the nose and slightly under where the hair falls will make this piece pop. If you don't want to do a bg then just a diffent color would make a world of difference. Keep it up, and remember to spend more time on your pieces. If your just doodling or pacticing with the tools remember, you don't have to send.
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I'm not going to be harsh though I am going to tell you the good AND bad points of this.
Good is that it's cute, a button nose, nice hair and eyes and overall, I like it.
The bad points are that the lines aren't very neat or smooth and you should fix them and also make a background.
The skin is good and overall it's really good for a first drawing.
Chiru, this is a good first. You have more than enough room to clean up the lines (they are messy and take away from the piece) Just go back with the soft erasure on medium flow and shave down the lines until they're smooth. The base is there so that shouldn't be hard. Find the light source (which looks like it's coming from the right) and add the highlights on that side. Especially in the eye for sparkle. Shading under the chin, a little under the nose and slightly under where the hair falls will make this piece pop. If you don't want to do a bg then just a diffent color would make a world of difference. Keep it up, and remember to spend more time on your pieces. If your just doodling or pacticing with the tools remember, you don't have to send.