Again, spend more time on your pieces, clean up the lineart (try a darker color of the skin tone, the black stands out too much) Lower the head a bit (necks too long) and thicken said neck, make her body larger (too small for the size of her head) round out her lower chin and jaw, and clean up the coloring. It's rather messy. I see you have talent, you just need to practice and refine it.

One last thing, you should stick to begginers before moving to intermediate. If you need to know what qualifies as intermediate check the board.