For skin think more in pinks and soft reds, this is too green. And are you using layers? There's just too many white spaces, like your trying to color around your lineart. That's one of the best things about Oekaki, layers. Color on a lower layer so your lineart stays untouched. And just go back over your lineart with the soft erasure to clean it up. Have to say this your best yet. ake advantage of the layers for good clean coloring. Keep going.