The eyelashes look just a bit choppy to me, you can fix it somewhat by zooming in real close and erasing in a tapered matter. It took a while to figure this out, but when you have a 1 pixel brush and you set the slide under opacity and then flow, to the indication mark, you'll get the thinnest lines. Hope you find this usefull.
Otherwise it looks good so far, that scrunched up mouth is funny.
Sh'es pretty, and I like her pose. The hairs my favorite part actually.
I'd say the mouth is a bit too high, too near her nose. Just needs to be lowered a little. The shape of her head is odd, when you look at a face at this angle it starts off as you have it on the forehead, turns in at the eye, then the cheek (all of which looks right) but it doesn't curve so sharply in towards the neck, it flares out just a bit as it get's to the chin, then forms the chin (I don't know if any of that makes sense, it's so much easier doing than writing) Her chin looks big but that may be because the mouth is so high, but you may need to make it smaller, course that would make her neck too long, so you'd have to lower her head slightly, and move it to our right a bit, it's jutting out just a tad too much (I make that mistake a lot as well) What Joy said about the lashes were correct. They look too cupie doll. By looking at natural lashes you see they're longer on the outside eye and nearly non-existent as they get towards the inside. Erase most of the lashes on the inner parts of the eyes (upper and lower) and make them longer and more tapered on the outer. And the brows could use some plucking :) One last thing, if you erase the extra part of the finger and just leave the tips (and make them just a little smaller) they'd fit better.
These are just suggestions, observations, smart allecky know it all stuff. You can just take it in for next time or not.
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Otherwise it looks good so far, that scrunched up mouth is funny.
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I'd say the mouth is a bit too high, too near her nose. Just needs to be lowered a little. The shape of her head is odd, when you look at a face at this angle it starts off as you have it on the forehead, turns in at the eye, then the cheek (all of which looks right) but it doesn't curve so sharply in towards the neck, it flares out just a bit as it get's to the chin, then forms the chin (I don't know if any of that makes sense, it's so much easier doing than writing) Her chin looks big but that may be because the mouth is so high, but you may need to make it smaller, course that would make her neck too long, so you'd have to lower her head slightly, and move it to our right a bit, it's jutting out just a tad too much (I make that mistake a lot as well) What Joy said about the lashes were correct. They look too cupie doll. By looking at natural lashes you see they're longer on the outside eye and nearly non-existent as they get towards the inside. Erase most of the lashes on the inner parts of the eyes (upper and lower) and make them longer and more tapered on the outer. And the brows could use some plucking :) One last thing, if you erase the extra part of the finger and just leave the tips (and make them just a little smaller) they'd fit better.
These are just suggestions, observations, smart allecky know it all stuff. You can just take it in for next time or not.