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BARF.
This took too long for what it actually is, lol. Contrast in the skin is off, but I'm happy with the basic character concept and the hand made me want to shoot babies, but all in all, I just needed a quick composition... which turned out to be a several hour long thing. Anyway. I'm doing a series of how this character evolved over time. This would be the first incarnation, who went under all of those names in the title. She was my first RPing character - on AOL in a Star Wars chatroom, lol. I was seven when I first came up with her, so the concept is a touch cliche, but I'll shut up now. First in what will be a long, long series, hopefully. :)
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drawn in 3 hours 15 min
This is nice, the left eye is too small and slanted though in comparison to her right. If you raised it up and widen it (not lengthen) and make her eye ball more visible than the little amount we see it wouldn't look so strange, and widen and lengthen her lips. Basic facial anatomy is using an upside down triangle. The corners of the eye would rest at the corner of the base of the triangle and the tip would rest in the middle of the bottom lip. The corners of the lip would lie under the middle of the eye's (maybe more or less but it wouldn't stray far from that basic composition) Even at half the angle the premise is the same. his is good don't get me wrong, just some adjustments would make it great.
The hand is good, just a little large. The wrist bone wouldn't be so far from the hand and stick out so much. Her shoulder is very boney as well, it should be rounder. I love the hair though, great hair.
Thank you -so- much for pointing all that out, I'm absolutely serious, I couldn't figure out why it looked wrong!
<3 <3 Thank you!