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clover_pocky (Jul 4, 2007)

you are,
all fire, glory and wind - and sunlight
through closed eyes on a spring day.
as I lay on my back,
grass smooth and sharp beneath my hands,
feeling, experiencing, being.
I know you
through the warmth of this day.
through my eyelids, on my cheek,
in the laughter of children that floats down from the docks,
rhythmic pulses of the waves against aging wood -
inhale the scent of green, the newly cut lawn.
I know you through these things.

...the breathy wind rifles through my shirt.

[for my boyfriend.]
c&c not desired, just tell me what this makes you think, please.

clover_pocky (Jul 4, 2007)
drawn in 1 hour 9 min

NOVEMBER93 (Jul 4, 2007)

I really like this. It has a Nightmare Before Christmas feel to it. <3

Anna (Jul 4, 2007)

nice! love the swirls. i am most drawn to the colors in the outer rings. cool drawing

Sweetcell (Jul 4, 2007)

Ooo, swirly and beautiful (I wish people stopped bringing up Nightmare Before Xmas, that is not what I thought when I first saw this, but now I'm going to think it) Well, pretty Clover.

enjoydotcom (Jul 5, 2007)

It looks like something somebody with skill (not me) could do with paint on a canvas. And I sure hang it on a wall.

gizemko3 (Jul 10, 2007)

i like poetry in general, too bad English isn't my mother tongue and so i can't really feel it. well, i do understand the words and all (and if not, there's always a dictionary near me), but i seem not to be able to ever catch 'it'... i guess i will stick to admiring the painting then. and that's a beautiful one