Do you use the blur tool? If you do, please don't. It can ruined a picture if not used properly.
Again, make her chin bigger and rounder and darken the lineart (especially around the bows, I can barely see them) Highlights in the eyes would make them sparkle, ink her ears to make them stand out, fix the color bleeding from the bows and hair (are you using layers?) Find out where the light source is coming from and put highlights where the light would hit and shading where it wouldn't (in this case I'm guessing the light is coming from the right) Make your lettering better and make your signature smaller, it's taking away from the picture, I look at that before I look at the girl, and make her skin darker. If you spend more time on your pieces you'd see better improvement.
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Again, make her chin bigger and rounder and darken the lineart (especially around the bows, I can barely see them) Highlights in the eyes would make them sparkle, ink her ears to make them stand out, fix the color bleeding from the bows and hair (are you using layers?) Find out where the light source is coming from and put highlights where the light would hit and shading where it wouldn't (in this case I'm guessing the light is coming from the right) Make your lettering better and make your signature smaller, it's taking away from the picture, I look at that before I look at the girl, and make her skin darker. If you spend more time on your pieces you'd see better improvement.