hey you dont have to be sorry, i think its great , of course it is kinda flashy, what i would suggest you is to really choose your colors carefully, by that i mean what feeling do you want to give? and also instead of putting rough lines try to erase them and put shadings, by shadings i mean a darker purple for the shirt or the pants. Nevertheless the emotion is there and it is quite nice.
thanks for commenting. i'll try to keep your words in my mind next time.:) I usually like drawing just pencil sketches, and i don't use that much colors, but today i felt like doing something.. colorfull:)
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