You need to clean up your lines. Use the erasure on low medium opacity and flow and slowly erase the jagged edges to get a smoother line. Use layers to color. Go back and fix the hair, don't make such ragged lines. Try filling in with a color than slowly, with the air brush, going over with different sized strokes and color, adding highlights in the end. And whatever those green things are on her cheecks, I suggest cleaning those up. This is fine but it's too sketchy. I encourage you to go back and fix this, it'll be better and you'll learn the tools as well. Those hearts should be cleaned up also. Remember, layers are your friend.

You need to back off a tad, tcell.

Just some friendly help, this really can look much better. As with everything the more you work and practice the better you become.

Just ignore her, angelcakes. They made her a mod and ever since then she's been running around here like a chicken with it's head cut off. Stick around, you'll see a pattern that shows lack of objectiveness based on personalities rather than the actual art. Hopefully it'll wear off soon.

Well I wouldn't say it's gotten to my head, I've critiqued pictures well before, but maybe I will be less Nazi-ish. But do consider going back to clean the lines Angel.

I would say it has.

Ok then, I'll take that to heart. I have in the past made comments but I'll step back and think first.

Sorry to highjack your pic Angel, some of us tend to chat like this. :)