boardsbeginnerAn Unexplained Death





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drawn in 20 min with Oekaki Shi-Painter
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hideyourface (Apr 7, 2007)
poem i wrote.


I left it on.
I left the light on.
Before it was on, I hoped he had gone.
When I turned the light on,
And the darkness had gone.
I knew-
I’d be dead before dawn.

When the cold had come,
When it ran down my arm,
It had come like a shock.
My body was numb,
Like a cold steel alarm,
Bound to the floor.
Though there wasn’t a lock.

My throat had gone dry.
My cry came as whimpers.
I couldn’t ask why
Its face crept upon me.
I couldn’t explain
(Though I try in last breaths)
How it said it would kill me.

Before the sun broke.
Before clouds that were red!
When a surreal being took
My life, I was dead.
hideyourface (Apr 7, 2007)
drawn in 20 min
sincity (Apr 7, 2007)
interesting. I like the pic for sure. The poem/ story is also good. I like. :}
DeadlyBlondeArcher (Apr 7, 2007)
The poem is very "loaded" and powerful, and the painting compliments it very well.
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