He's not half wrong, you should try to finish pieces before you start new ones, no need to be snippy like that honey. I can see a lot of work that needs to be done on this. The lineart can be smoothed out (try the airbrush not the pen, a little thicker than normal and go back with smooth erasure on med opacity shaving the lines down. It's a little more tedious but your lines will be clean) Take advantage of the Bezier if it's hard to do free hand lines. You can get some nice round and curvey shapes. A little better coloring some shading and highlight's and erase the colors that have bled out the lines. Work a little more on the face and hood and this would look nice. You might want to also refine the lettering because I can't make out what it says.
This is not an insult to you or your art, it's suggestions. Take it as you will. I just want to add if your just going to doodle you don't need to send it.
okay sweetcell, and the lettering is graffiti...so alot of people can't read it...i don't really draw on the computer.. ill stick with writing on walls... but i guess... thanks for the advice.. what ever. (and axil won?...this isnt a competition, and if you think it is....sorry you exist)
Oh, arguing is pointless. Axil is just being Axil.. and
sweetcell is just trying to give tips and encouragement
in her own snippy way. Just say thank you, think go
to hell, and keep drawing man. That's all I can say.
try your best on each pic. That's all we can do right?
They can't appreciate what they don't understand....keep throwing out your pieces, cause they don't understand your style or graffiti...:) i like your work....don't let them run you off too.
We're not trying to run anyone off shortie, we're only pointing out as you've done on other people's work that more time and effort spent on a piece would make it better. Why you would say that is strange to me. It is quick and messy but it can be improved, like all her pieces. I'll say it one more time, this isn't a doodle site.
listen i come back cuz im bored in school with shit to do, and had to announce im leaving...is there any way you can delete accounts on this? anyway...yes maiko you can move it... it don't matter... and no i didn't comment to get it back to the front page...i could give two fucks where it is....so shut up sweetcell....thanks i appreciate it
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This is not an insult to you or your art, it's suggestions. Take it as you will. I just want to add if your just going to doodle you don't need to send it.
Hurry up and bite, boy, I wanna make my point.
:D
sweetcell is just trying to give tips and encouragement
in her own snippy way. Just say thank you, think go
to hell, and keep drawing man. That's all I can say.
try your best on each pic. That's all we can do right?
it's incredibly messy linework, and may I suggest using layers? D:
Your still retarded. :D