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LadyBlader (Dec 25, 2006)

This would be my second attempt at oekaki. ^_^ I rather like it.
The character featured here is supposed to be Takao Kinomiya, from 'Beyblade.' I did him no justice. v_v
This time I knew what most of the little buttons and tools did, so I tried to focus more on shading and highlights. I am very bad at highlighting and shading, I think. Need more practice...
Still! I like it! *puffs chest out proudly*
...with a very poor background... ah, well. Criticism appreciated!

LadyBlader (Dec 25, 2006)
drawn in 1 hour 51 min

Soldifar (Dec 26, 2006)

Beyblade! Wow, I used to watch that show when I was younger... Well, the first season at least.
Anyway, I would suggest to make your lineart smoother, and a bit thinner. The white of his eye should be there as well, and add some shading on his shirt. More shading should be added to the back of his head, and to his ponytail.
Pretty good for a second attempt! You're improving pretty fast.