Hm, perhaps you may want to add the bottom eyelid to take up a bit more space, darken the shading beneath the eye, and make the eyebrow thicker.
The detail on the eye is very good. I would also suggest to make the highlights on the eye completely white, to give the eye the liquid quality it posseses.
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The detail on the eye is very good. I would also suggest to make the highlights on the eye completely white, to give the eye the liquid quality it posseses.
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