I find myself waiting for the curtain to start moving softly with a gentle breeze passing through then I am captured by the figure and her tranquility. I notice the book and wonder what has captured her thoughts. I love the colors, the lines, and the patterns in the draw and her bare feet give a feeling of warmth and comfort. I love the overall effect of this one. Personally, I don't think you need to change a thing.
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