These drawings you've been making would look a lot cooler if you didnt make the lines sketchy. Try making the sketchy-ness on a bottem later, then on a top layer just make one line, I'd look better if you ask me.
i disagree with you, kazukie. i think the sketchy is fine. Lineart is too bland and un-interesting for these kind of odd pictures. If he used smooth lines, the picture would look totally off. I do think you could try to be a little less sparatic, however, Zappo. I like the sketchy, but it might look even better if you erased a few of the lines that aren't filled in with color.
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