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Eliafin (Jul 26, 2003)

*dies* X.x This is my first drawing with Lascaux so I put a LOT of effort in to it. Now the timer's off by about 15 minutes, even so, that's the longest I've ever spent on a drawing! ^_^ The bg sucks 'cause I'm useless at them -_-;; C&C would be nice ^_^;;

Eliafin (Jul 26, 2003)
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marcello (edited Jul 26, 2003)

You might try adding detail in the background by using finer brushes (not black).
The lineart is pretty good, nice style. The rays of light look a little cheap, and I'm not sure if they should be there or not, cause at the moment they seem half-assed. I would recommending going over them with freehand eraser/paint until they look more natural.
Otherwise, pretty good for first time in the applet. I take it you picked it up quickly?

Eliafin (edited Jul 26, 2003)

Thank's for the comments, I'll see what I can do about the light, I usually cheat and use the filters on Photoshop! ^_^;; I'll see if I can fix the bg too, I normally don't bother but he needed something to lean on O.o;;
Heheh, I learn fast ^_^;;

:edit: Ack the layers are merged!! -_-;; I don't this I'll be able to do anything. O.o;;

Mikki (edited Aug 5, 2003)

^_^ it's really good, appart from the fact that his body looks a bit sort of square...I dunno, he doesn't have any shoulderblades O.o *is half asleep* don't mind me...