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huckman42 (Jul 23, 2006)

this is an attempt to do something - i havent done anything for ever let me know what you think- or if ive improved haha- cool, ive got some good feedback- but unfortunatly i can no longer revise this picture- so ill have to do new ones to see if i improve at all :)

huckman42 (Jul 23, 2006)
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huckman42 (Jul 31, 2006)
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My first back attempt to try this out again- Its at least better than my older stuff haha let me know think

huckman42 (Jul 31, 2006)
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The_Chosen (Aug 1, 2006)

the arms/ hands need work the upper part of the arm isn't in proportion it's too short (the lower part may be short as well but the upper part is thrwoing me off and I think the hands are a bit small the guy's elbow should come to just above his hip bone also to check the proportion of the hands try holding your own hand up to your face to get an idea of how big it is compaired to your head.
the shading is lookin better and the water looks great it's a good position and an intreting picture it has potential I just think it needs a bit of work KEEP IT UP!

eevildeeva (edited Aug 1, 2006)

This is looking good so far, at first glance I did think it was one of those creepy muscle chicks however. The jawline, neck and arms are masculine enough....it's something about the pecs.. maybe they're accented a little too much, or just a bit too deeply shaded. I kinda thought they were female breasts. I do like this though, keep going..

colls (Aug 2, 2006)

This reminds me of Micheal Jackson, at least that's what I think of when I look at this =/