hope you dont mind a little constructive criticism... *ahem* ok. well, you should try to improve your understanding of the mucsular and bone structure and proportions of the face to better position the facial features, because this face looks rather alien. mostly due to the eyes. The inner eye looks unnatural and should never have black outlines in it even when drawing in an anime style. Showing an understanding of these things in your work is more impressive than being able to draw a clean line.
Well, actually, mikhail... I believe that the proportions demonstrated here are part of vigilante's style. Even though the construction of the face does appear alien to our sensibilities, that may be just what vigilante intended. I actually can see nothing wrong with the start of this picture, other than the fringe on the forehead (don't make the same mistake I did in the past, and don't draw hair like banannas :D that's what a friend of mine told me hair in that style looks like XD). Really, one should only comment on disproportion and inequality in the features of a drawing. This drawing seems pretty proportional (and therefore asthetically pleasing) to me, so it's only a matter of personal taste that's in question.
Whee, ah yuz beeg wurds! lol.
vigilante (edited Nov 9, 2012)
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Whee, ah yuz beeg wurds! lol.
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Ahaha, I had a banannamango smoothie this morning, and it was good.
and that was random. LOL.