Regarding your issues with the profile, which are few, I might add: if you wish to fix it, all you have to do is realign the positioning of the forehead, and work from there. In this picture, for example, the forehead is not far enough foreward. Also, the forehead is supposed to be sort of in line with the lips, with the nose being a protrusion from this surface. So, by simply moving the forehead to be sort of in line with the lips, and by making the slant of the nose steeper and the definition of the nostrils evident and the septum joining into the upper lip at less of an angle, profiles will become very happy :)
(If any of that made sense. lol.)
One more thing... Try not to make the neck too far back from the tip of the jawbone... Remember that the head and neck are continuous, and that the neck has to support the entire head, and that it doesn't just go flat into the back of the head.
If necessary, I'll draw out what I've said :) I'm not very coherent right now XD
This is a good profile, except for whatever the heck wboyer said.
also, the forehead stops at one of her bangs there should be more of it on the other side.
Stop puting yerself down when you draw something, their good, seriosly.
No worries, Kisshu :D I'm glad I was able to help :D And senshi is right, don't put yourself down! You are way the heck better at art than alot of people, and you show a huge amount of potential :) Keep it up!
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Regarding your issues with the profile, which are few, I might add: if you wish to fix it, all you have to do is realign the positioning of the forehead, and work from there. In this picture, for example, the forehead is not far enough foreward. Also, the forehead is supposed to be sort of in line with the lips, with the nose being a protrusion from this surface. So, by simply moving the forehead to be sort of in line with the lips, and by making the slant of the nose steeper and the definition of the nostrils evident and the septum joining into the upper lip at less of an angle, profiles will become very happy :)
(If any of that made sense. lol.)
One more thing... Try not to make the neck too far back from the tip of the jawbone... Remember that the head and neck are continuous, and that the neck has to support the entire head, and that it doesn't just go flat into the back of the head.
If necessary, I'll draw out what I've said :) I'm not very coherent right now XD
also, the forehead stops at one of her bangs there should be more of it on the other side.
Stop puting yerself down when you draw something, their good, seriosly.