Well, I have to say your getting better. May I suggest putting some pupils and highlights. He looks dead without pupils, unless his eyes are closed then it needs a slight line middle of the eye to show the crease of the eyelid. And maybe just shade part of his shirt. Where his under arms would be, and just a little more shading under the chin, and make the chin less pointy. Getting better.
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