good start, and I don't think your picture looks weird at all.
Suggestions for your drawing.
You've drawn your face too wide especially on the left side (our left, not your left in the picture.
Look how much space is between the side of your face and your lip in the picture, you have about 2 thirds more drawn than you need. you can also take a little off the right as well.
you should also look at the location and size of your mouth, in your picture you can draw a line from the middle of your eye to the corner of your mouth, in the drawing your mouth only reaches the corner of your eye.
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Suggestions for your drawing.
You've drawn your face too wide especially on the left side (our left, not your left in the picture.
Look how much space is between the side of your face and your lip in the picture, you have about 2 thirds more drawn than you need. you can also take a little off the right as well.
you should also look at the location and size of your mouth, in your picture you can draw a line from the middle of your eye to the corner of your mouth, in the drawing your mouth only reaches the corner of your eye.
Just a few suggestions, hope it helps.
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'n thanks to you to dave!
glad I could help
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