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drawn in 6 hours 44 min with Oekaki Shi-Painter
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Dabbler
silver_maiden (Apr 28, 2006)
self explanitory
silver_maiden (Apr 28, 2006)
drawn in 2 hours 12 min
silver_maiden (Apr 29, 2006)
drawn in 2 hours 22 min
silver_maiden (Apr 29, 2006)
drawn in 1 hour 51 min
I think.. "m done. If there's any thing wrong with it, plz tell. ><
woah_pockster (Apr 29, 2006)
I love the shading<3
time for come constructive crit! =]
hm.. maybe you can bring in his ear a little and make it a touch bigger, maybe the neck is a little wide as well
and maybe bring down the eye on the left a few pixels?
the rib area on the right kinda looks to thin, bring it out a little more?
and I hope I have't offended you at alll, I'm just giving some tips to help you =]
<33 keep it up! practice practice practice! <3
silver_maiden (Apr 29, 2006)
Looks like your right there. I have small ears, so xDDDD Yeah.
I see my faults now. Thanks a bunch. I'll go ahead and work on it. Although the rib will be the hanrdest. I nvr get offended for constructive critism. Thanks.
silver_maiden (Apr 29, 2006)
drawn in 18 min
I tried my best here. The rib cage is bigger. But I culdn't do the ear right. :/ Sorry.
Moved the eye too.
woah_pockster (Apr 30, 2006)
Looks much better now :D and the ear looks fine my dear<3 I love it, great job ^^
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