Her chin looks too long, or her lips are too high. And, it looks like someone took a knife and carved out some holes to make nostrils. The hair looks nice.
lmfao it's supposed to be like that. i'm not done. unfortunately i didn't mention i was making a half human half dragon type being so thanks for all the obvious comments. i'm glad those stick out :) i thought the slitted eyes would give it away but i guess not
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