You're drawing the eyes too high, make sure to leave space for the forehead. I'll admit this is better than your previous submissions, but you should try practicing the face, and try drawing a full-body shot.
Not to sound mean, but I decided to help you out with some critique: http://i2.tinypic.com/v2tyex.jpg
Based on the way the face is pointing to, the mouth would look better on the other side of the face ( that's a mouth, right? =__=;). The eyes are too high and spaced out, and the neck is too thick. D:
I hope I helped
drawn in 32 min
http://i2.tinypic.com/v2tyex.jpg
Based on the way the face is pointing to, the mouth would look better on the other side of the face ( that's a mouth, right? =__=;). The eyes are too high and spaced out, and the neck is too thick. D:
I hope I helped