face is off center, needs to go more to the right, hair needs to be thinner to be more realistic, and the way you have it going right now the nose will hit right at the edge of your "canvas" unless you're going for a different perspective where the top of the head is tilted more towards you. Just keep playing around with it. You'll figure it out! Great start though, and I like the eye. I wouldn't start over, it's looking good!
drawn in 36 min
I like the eyes alot :D I suck at realism and i'ms till wokring on it, so i can't say much... :0 but this is good :D wai!