To improve it, I think maybe you could make the head a bit longer. Her eyes are very close to the top of her head and there isn't much in the way of hair above her eyes either. If that makes sense. ^_^
Well, since you asked for it...
You're missing the forehead and the shape of the head is off. >_> Well, not completely off. Try looking at some photos of people or look up an anatomy site to help you with drawing the head and body. The eyes need improvement too; they're freaky-big, man. XD Eyes are more almond or oval shaped, and they're not just one big circle. Do you see the big black spots you've drawn in the eyes? Those are the pupils, and they really shouldn't be so big. If you're trying to go anime style, the eyes are bigger and more stylized than normal, but keep the pupil as a small, visible dot. The hair...is alright. It's probably the lack of the forehead that makes it look odd. It'd be best if you tried to put a little more detail, like highlights (not the type you get at a salon, but the shine that comes from light) in the hair like kristine said.
One last thing: she's deathly pale. Unless you wanted her like that, you should color in the skin.
Wah...sorry for being so long winded.
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To improve it, I think maybe you could make the head a bit longer. Her eyes are very close to the top of her head and there isn't much in the way of hair above her eyes either. If that makes sense. ^_^
You're missing the forehead and the shape of the head is off. >_> Well, not completely off. Try looking at some photos of people or look up an anatomy site to help you with drawing the head and body. The eyes need improvement too; they're freaky-big, man. XD Eyes are more almond or oval shaped, and they're not just one big circle. Do you see the big black spots you've drawn in the eyes? Those are the pupils, and they really shouldn't be so big. If you're trying to go anime style, the eyes are bigger and more stylized than normal, but keep the pupil as a small, visible dot. The hair...is alright. It's probably the lack of the forehead that makes it look odd. It'd be best if you tried to put a little more detail, like highlights (not the type you get at a salon, but the shine that comes from light) in the hair like kristine said.
One last thing: she's deathly pale. Unless you wanted her like that, you should color in the skin.
Wah...sorry for being so long winded.
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