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George_Goat (Feb 17, 2006)
drawn in 1 day 5 hours

davincipoppalag (Feb 17, 2006)

One thing that might help from what little I know about it, seems that you should sharpen up the hand so the focus is clearer. It's the closest thing in the picture. I think the perpective on it looks right, though maybe that cuff is a bit too far up her arm in the position it's in , judging by the left one. Is she supposed to have big buck teeth?

DeadlyBlondeArcher (Feb 17, 2006)

The teeth are really the only thing that disturbs me about this... unless they are supposed to be that way for some reason (it looks very deliberate... the buck tooth thing)... so I am reluctant to tell you how to remedy it... did you intend that? I think what you had in mind for the hand is working... I thought so before I read any text here.. that was my favorite thing about the pic, the frontal hand.

George_Goat (Feb 17, 2006)

Ah, thank you both very much! =O
I definitely will take that into consideration, I did leave the hand kind of smudged/blurry, mostly because I was unsure what seemed to be the trouble. And indeed, the cuff's too high up. For now I'll just say it's....rolled up while the other one isn't. >U<
Now that I looked away and see it again I'm also thinking I might add a tiny bit more shadow to the very base of the fingers and maybe make the tips even lighter, for more contrast and dimensionality.

And yep, the teeth were drawn that way specifically for the customer. X3 I also think it would have been a less...disturbing picture without them, but, the customer is always...right. Dx

You both were a great help. <3

suzie (Feb 20, 2006)

I think the perspective on the hand is just perfect how it is, and I am jealous as my perspective needs practice! :S Nice draw :D

xXxJamiexXx (Feb 22, 2006)

Wow this is really a pretty picture...except the teeth, why are the teeth there?

George_Goat (Mar 28, 2006)

xXxJamiexXx: Read my comment right before suzie's? >.>