Finally it's finished and out of my studio. This one I wasn't sure of, I had the image in my head but it didn't quite come out that way. Ah well, I'm satisfied and I can clear my studio of one less.
I like the figure and idea, but the background is too intense at the moment and doesn't feel distant. Try fading it out some so it has less contrast and a lighter overall value, closer to the lightness of the hills and sky. That way the woman's head will pop forward more and you'll have a nice sense of depth in the picture. You might want to put a stronger shadow under the ragged bits of cloth over her stomach as it looks a bit like disfigured skin at first glance. I like the detail and design in the picture though, good stuff.
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