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drawn in 56 min with Lascaux Sketch Classic
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Pseudonymous (Feb 11, 2006) — edit
Constructive criticism, anyone?

Edit: It's not worth it to ask for more space, so it's gonna stay as is. Oh well. :)
Pseudonymous (Feb 11, 2006)
drawn in 56 min
davincipoppalag (Feb 11, 2006)
I think its very good. The hair looks kinda flat and could use more details but I like this.
DoOp (Feb 12, 2006)
you'll hurt me when i say all this~ but I'm guessing you ment to make this look a bit blurred, for a nice look ish thing ^^ the hair shading, needs work. you shaded one area making that look pretty cool, but on the other side *the right* i looks neeked :0 well, not really, just not AS shaded i guess the hat is wonderful and i love the face! xD but one eyes *the left one* looks blurred out while the other isn't :'d but that's my imput, and i ain't good at it xD so just work more on this and it'll be real sweet :)
Pseudonymous (Feb 12, 2006)
Thank you, you guys!
terracotta (Feb 12, 2006)
Very pretty, Pseu. for an overall impressionistic effect I don't think you need to do a lot of fine detailing. Here's what I'd do: lighten those shadows behind her ears and spread them over the hair so that it looks like the brim of the hat is casting a shadow over the hair (but not too dark.) Think about where your light source is in this picture and then you'll know where the shadows should fall. You might try shaping the bridge of her nose a little--most people don't have a bone in the bridge of their nose that is quite that wide from top to bottom. Also, a small shadow underneath her lower lip will indicate the indented curve between lip and chin--think of it as the shadow that the protrusion of the lower lip casts on the top of the chin. Your skin tones are real nice.
SYTHE (Feb 12, 2006)
Looks like her nose is a bit long and the top looks a bit flat. I think the black rose/bow needs some more detail, maybe some lighter areas on top? I agree that the hair looks a bit undefined as well.
Pseudonymous (edited Feb 13, 2006)
You're right, Sythe. I was trying to get the bottom moved upward, but I couldn't figure out how to on Lascaux. Any ideas? Do I just have to draw it all over?

Edit: Whoa. I had no idea I reached my limit on this thing. O_O
SYTHE (Feb 17, 2006)
Yep, those pesky limits just hit you from outta nowhere don't they?!?
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