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Felistorm (Dec 20, 2005)

Need critique...as far as I can see the eyes are too large (or well the one is) nose may be a bit crooked up top and yes her hairstyle sucks. Needs more shading/highlighting...where? Cheeks? brighter on the chin?

Felistorm (Dec 20, 2005)
drawn in 1 hour 25 min

nobody (edited Dec 20, 2005)

-look at the shape of a human eye. it isn't like an almond at all. take a good look, and try to see the many subtle highlights and curves in the skin and structure of the eye.

-go lighter and darker even more on the skin tones. much more. then when you think you've gone too far, go farther.

-try using opacity and flow more to your advantage. i like the 150ish settings for both personally.

-the hair is good :) try using lower opacity on the strands though to get it smoother, if you wish. also, the airbrush is helpful.

-there is a lot that is good here. just keep at it.

Zikira (Dec 20, 2005)

Yes, the hair is good. :] It's very pretty now, the cheeks could use a bit blush-ing and don''t stay with a neutral for the base of the face, go from darkest to light using a light source, and shadow/highlight from there. Pillow shading isn't good [which is what I did because I'm a lazy butt] so go with where your light falls, there are some smudges on the top of the head so you may want to clean that up.

Overall it's very nice. ^__^