Okay,if I were you,I would fix her stomach,and erase the circles well erase the complete circles. So it well look like its not flat against my screen,unless she is pressing it against glass. I think you should spend more than 13 minutes,but thats what I think,you don't have to listen to me,this is your drawing,unless someone joins you,then its both of your picture, Good Luck!!
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