o_n;; Nnh! Its not as bad as you say it is! Especially for your first doodle EVER on Oekaki!
The shading beneath the eye brow is shnazzy! And the detail in the pupil is really cool!
Mess around with PaintBBS! It would've been better if it was colored, but thats probably just it.
So...pretty...damn. Just committed ultimate comment sin. I said 'pretty'. Anyway...this is GREAT for your first pic. And...mm. Possibly make the eyelid a little thicker in places, and have it curve towards the shape of the eye a bit more.
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The shading beneath the eye brow is shnazzy! And the detail in the pupil is really cool!
Mess around with PaintBBS! It would've been better if it was colored, but thats probably just it.