Nice beginning and I like your hair but there are few things wrong with your anatomy. Your breasts should come closer to gether and down a little. References or tutorials are good for that area. Coming down you have no hips. Your hips should start to show about where you've placed your belly button. Your legs also look misplaced and anatomically incorrect as well as the arms. You can use yourself as a reference when looking at a mirror. That way you can look to see where you arms are placed that you want for your picture. As for your legs...first get your hips right and then work from there. Your neck also looks a bit long which is easily fixed with the eraser tool ^.-. Aaahh what a wonderful tool.
Your on the right track. I really like the image and the colors are very nice. Just some corrections to your body and it should look like a great picture.
Ok, I made hips - But otherwise, the criticism was... Not very constructive. First of all, she's wearing a bustier. Dictionary.com for all of those who don't know. That's why her breasts are lifted and seperated. I made a transparenty-thing for the legs, 'cause they aren't misplaced. The arms, could quite possibly be weird, but it doesn't really bother me and I happen to like them. And the neck is my style. I do it on purpose. :3
The legs and hips are still quite incorrect. For example, the length from the hip to the knee should be about the same as from the hip to the shoulder. Hips are rarely much narrower than the bust/shoulder width, and you've drawn it nearly half the width. 2draw seriously needs an 'annotation' feature.
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Your on the right track. I really like the image and the colors are very nice. Just some corrections to your body and it should look like a great picture.
Good luck!
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