Her eye is very pretty. Um, I'm not sure entirely on how to improve it. Lots of it is kind of "blurry" (messy might be a better word, but hopefully you know what I'm talking about anyway), but I'm assuming that you were already going to try and fix that some.

Good job, you made it look alot cleaner in this revision. Now I think you just need to fix up the hand some and possibly her left side of her head.

This is really pretty... I've been watching the revisions on it but didn't get a chance to comment yet. Great job. It's so cute