I like the character, colors and background but lately I've noticed all these dark words (Forgotten, bloody, cut, broken, et cetera) are all becoming rather cliche. I purpose changing it or using some diffrent wordage. A thesaurus can be a persons best friend (www.dictionary.com has one, great site to go to especially for homework/essays and what not.) Again, the background is fantastic and the character is great... Keep up the good work!!!
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