Cool, I like the light effects/background, it looks all lit up and...er...blue! <:D It kinda reminds me of what i did ages ago: http://cellosoft.com/2draw/view/47166/
the white around the edges of the eye and curvy lines kind of takes away from the picture. Also the shape of the eye should be made smoother/thinner. Although the idea and composition is very good.
drawn in 29 min