OK, what i see is his body is kinda slump if you know what i mean. If not, just ask. Notice the curve of his body. Notice how is chest is turned slightly to our left, and his hips are turned a little more to the right.. not much of a difference though. now i'm not sure what you want to do with the left arm. I think that it wouldn't be so stuck out.. it would be more "hanging" like. Since hes in a slump positon. His eye I think shouldn't be raised. Now i'm not the best in anatomy, but I know that your forehead takes up some room on your head. Like, you have some forehead before you reach the eyes.. You don't want your eyes to be on your forehead. I Love the facial expression of course. Don't I always? And i really like the hair. I hope that helps, anymore questions just ask me! ^^
well, I think the body is fine. The left arm is going to be tricky but I can try to help if you want because I'm not really go at explaining. Also about forehead, you should maybe move the hairline up a bit, no the eye, because if you move the eye you'll have to change the nose, mouth then face shape.
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i dont know how to attach his left arm, every atempt has failed.
also, should i move his eye up?
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